My flight was late, teetering on the edge between life and death. I closed my eyes and considered existence, suspended in this space. My toes hooked on cold brick as I clung facing the abyss. I couldn’t jump. Held fast by the wings of night, I just couldn’t take flight.
About: This piece was my final submission in the YeahWrite Super Challenge #18 where all work had to begin with the prompt “My flight was late.” Additionally, each submission had to be exactly 50 words. I was disqualified for changing the the period after the prompt to a comma.
as always you do not disappoint Julie Kusma : ) .. all the words have been used but will say them again .. Brilliant, Amazing and just downright talented in the way of word ..thank you for sharing… need more!
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Thank you, Mitch. So happy you enjoyed.
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What a great piece of art by Ms. Kusma!!!!
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Thank you, David. I appreciate your support more than you know.
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I know you do Julie! You’re quite talented!
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As usual, this is so fantastic. It’s really too bad you were disqualified. Gripping is the word for it.
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Thank you so much, Jill
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I ft was interesting pice I have never see or read a price like it but as I said it was interesting
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Thank you
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