“My flight was late,” I confessed. The sweet, sultry memory stirred. Rare for me to concede to desire, but our dance’s push-pull elevated want to need. My arousal came not from his touch. For me, it was the draw of the blade and the slow sound his last breath made.
About: This piece was a potential submission in the YeahWrite Super Challenge #18 where all work had to begin with the prompt “My flight was late.” Additionally, each submission had to be exactly 50 words.
Wow! Genius writing Julie!
You never cease to amaze me!!!
Briliant and concise!
My imagination at work!
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Oh, thank you David. I hope I continue to amaze!!!
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My pleasure! You always will!!!
Keep up your amazing work!
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Whoa. You always bring out an array of emotions with every piece. Well done. ♥
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Thank you so much Jill. I appreciate you and our friendship.
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Awesome as usual dear Julie, always happy to read your work.💕🤗
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Thank you so much, Quinn. I appreciate your support and friendship.
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Suspenseful. Waiting for more
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Thanks, Cheryl- you are always so supportive.
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Brilliantly amazing in all the ways you are Jules! Such an amazing scary writer person thingie!.. backing out of your blog, fully aware of my surroundings.. so don’t try a thing:: knowing it will surprise me anyway! lol Brava! Jules~!
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Thanks, Mitch- hey don’t look behind you. LOL
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I really enjoyed it; mysterious, sensual, and deadly!! My kinda story!
LC Ahl
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HA! Mine too, Lucy, mine too!
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